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Arnold Prentice

Arnold "Arnie" Prentice, a former firefighter who helped rescue three people from Drake Towers after King Missile smashed into it.

Current Occupation: Retired, disability
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 |intro        = Arnold "Arnie" Prentice, a former firefighter, with the [[Astro City Fire Department|A.C.F.D.]], who helped rescue three people from [[Drake Towers]] after [[King Missile]] smashed into it in 2001.
-|history      = A year after accident at Drake Towers, in which he lost his leg, he was visiting his old fire station, like he did most Saturdays, when the young boy he rescued was there to meet him.
+|history      = A year after a tragic accident at Drake Towers, in which he lost his leg, Prentice visited his old fire station, like he did most Saturdays, when the young boy he rescued was there to meet him.
-[[Farrell]] wanted to thank him personally for saving him. Farrell's father gave him a ride home and naturally Farrell wanted to ask him questions, mostly, "Why he went back in?" after Farrell was rescued. Farrell responded because someone had to and it's better to be the trained professionals. Because even in a world with heroes, they won't  be there all the time to help citizens out of jams. To him it was also well worth losing his leg, due to the fact in his career the total number of people he had saved.
+[[Farrell]] wanted to thank him personally for saving him. Farrell's father gave him a ride home and naturally Farrell wanted to ask him questions, mostly, "Why he went back in?" after Farrell was rescued. Farrell responded because someone had to and it's better to be the trained professionals. Even in a world with super powerful heroes, they can't be there all the time to help citizens out of jams. Considering the people he rescued, he felt the price of losing his leg was worth it, and then some.
-After Farrell and his father dropped him off at a cemetery, the young boy was at first confused. Then his father explained, that the gravesites he was visiting, were the men who pulled Arnie out.
+After dropping Prentice off at a cemetery, the young boy was a bit confused. His father explained that the gravesites he was visiting, were for the men who sacrificed their lives to save Arnie.
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+|footnotes    = The name Prentice is a reference to ''Rip Kirby'' artist [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/John_Prentice_%28cartoonist%29 John Prentice].
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-Arnold "Arnie" Prentice, a former firefighter who helped rescue three people from Drake Towers after King Missile smashed into it.
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-Current Occupation: Retired, disability
+[[Farrell]] wanted to thank him personally for saving him. Farrell's father gave him a ride home and naturally Farrell wanted to ask him questions, mostly, "Why he went back in?" after Farrell was rescued. Farrell responded because someone had to and it's better to be the trained professionals. Because even in a world with heroes, they won't  be there all the time to help citizens out of jams. To him it was also well worth losing his leg, due to the fact in his career the total number of people he had saved.
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