Cleopatra (Sarah Brandeis) - Revision history

Astrozac at 05:48, 1 April 2017

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Astrozac at 06:49, 18 May 2016

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Astrozac at 06:48, 18 May 2016

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Astrozac at 06:48, 18 May 2016

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Astrozac at 06:31, 18 May 2016

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Astrozac at 06:25, 18 May 2016

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Astrozac: Adding a bit more to her history...

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Adding a bit more to her history...

Astrozac at 05:53, 16 May 2016

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 {{BEAUTIE}} [[{{BEAUTIE}}|#1]] <br>
 {{DA3}} [[{{DA3}} No.1|#1]], [[{{DA3}} No.4|4]]<br>
-{{AC}} [[{{AC}} No.1|#1]], 2, 3, 6, 17, 25, 27<br>
+{{AC}} [[{{AC}} No.1|#1]], [[{{AC}} No.2|2]], 3, 6, 17, 25, 27<br>
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 |status       = Active
 |realname     = Sarah Brandeis
-|debut        = {{KBAC1}} [[1:1|#1]]
+|debut        =
-|earliest     = March, 1982
+|earliest     =
 |origin       = {{DA3}} #1
 |affiliation  = [[Honor Guard]]<br>
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 |headlines    =
 |appearances  =
-{{KBAC1}} [[1:1|#1]], [[1:6|6]]<br>
+{{KBAC1}} [[{{KBAC1}} No.1|#1]], [[{{KBAC1}} No.6|6]]<br>
-{{KBAC2}} [[2:1|#1]], [[2:6|6]], [[2:7|7]], [[2:9|9]], [[2:19|19]], [[2:20|20]], [[2:22|22]]<br>
+{{KBAC2}} [[{{KBAC2}} No.1|#1]], [[{{KBAC2}} No.6|6]], [[{{KBAC2}} No.7|7]], [[{{KBAC2}} No.9|9]], [[{{KBAC2}} No.19|19]], [[{{KBAC2}} No.20|20]], [[{{KBAC2}} No.22|22]]<br>
-{{LH}} [[LH:1|#1]], [[LH:3|3]]<br>
+{{LH}} [[{{LH}} No.1|#1]], [[{{LH}} No.3|3]]<br>
-{{BEAUTIE}} [[CS:Beautie|#1]] <br>
+{{BEAUTIE}} [[{{BEAUTIE}}|#1]] <br>
-{{DA3}} [[DA3:1|#1]], [[DA3:4|4]]<br>
+{{DA3}} [[{{DA3}} No.1|#1]], [[{{DA3}} No.4|4]]<br>
-{{AC}} [[3:1|#1]], 2, 3, 6, 17, 25, 27<br>
+{{AC}} [[{{AC}} No.1|#1]], 2, 3, 6, 17, 25, 27<br>
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	Teaming with [[Jack-in-the-Box (Roscoe James)\|Jack-in-the-Box]] on a case in April of 2003, the duo reapprehended [[Demolitia]] and [[Slamburger]] who were trying to intimidate a member of the east-coast mob to agree to a deal on their terms.		Teaming with [[Jack-in-the-Box (Roscoe James)\|Jack-in-the-Box]] on a case in April of 2003, the duo reapprehended [[Demolitia]] and [[Slamburger]] who were trying to intimidate a member of the east-coast mob to agree to a deal on their terms.

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−	~~\|notes = Piece together a history of her activities with Honor Guard prior to the current {{AC}} series.~~
−	}}

	===Current Honor Guard Activities===		===Current Honor Guard Activities===

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 ===Joining Honor Guard and Solo Efforts===
-Cleopatra has been a member of Honor Guard since at least 1995 and has had many exploits with them. Durping the [[Enelsian Invasion]], Cleopatra and Honor Guard were instrumental in discovering the initial Enelsian scout ship and later defending Astro City, which faced the brunt of the aliens attack. She also was present when the reawakened [[Omnius Rex]] in late 2004 required the combined might of Honor Guard, the [[First Family]] and other heroes of Astro City to be ultimately defeated.
+Cleopatra has been a member of Honor Guard since at least 1995 and has had many exploits with them. During the [[Enelsian Invasion]], Cleopatra and Honor Guard were instrumental in discovering the initial Enelsian scout ship and later defending Astro City, which faced the brunt of the aliens attack. She also was present when the reawakened [[Omnius Rex]] in late 2004 required the combined might of Honor Guard, the [[First Family]] and other heroes of Astro City to be ultimately defeated.
 In 2008, she again took part in helping repel an invading alien force with Honor Guard, this time the [[Torori]], whom the team fought with at Jupiter Station in outer space.

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 ===Joining Honor Guard and Solo Efforts===
-Cleopatra has been a member of Honor Guard since at least 1995 and has had many exploits with them0. During the [[Enelsian Invasion]], Cleopatra and Honor Guard were instrumental in discovering the initial Enelsian scout ship and later defending Astro City, which faced the brunt of the aliens attack. She also was present when the reawakened [[Omnius Rex]] in late 2004 required the combined might of Honor Guard, the [[First Family]] and other heroes of Astro City to be ultimately defeated.
+Cleopatra has been a member of Honor Guard since at least 1995 and has had many exploits with them. Durping the [[Enelsian Invasion]], Cleopatra and Honor Guard were instrumental in discovering the initial Enelsian scout ship and later defending Astro City, which faced the brunt of the aliens attack. She also was present when the reawakened [[Omnius Rex]] in late 2004 required the combined might of Honor Guard, the [[First Family]] and other heroes of Astro City to be ultimately defeated.
 In 2008, she again took part in helping repel an invading alien force with Honor Guard, this time the [[Torori]], whom the team fought with at Jupiter Station in outer space.

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 In the ensuing months, The Omega Rangers helped her adjust to the culture shock of her new situation. Their most vital assistance was providing her with training on using her powers effectively. She quickly earned membership with the team.
-===Established Hero and Joining Honor Guard===
+===Joining Honor Guard and Solo Efforts===
-In December of 1995 she took on [[Gnomicron]] at some point, presumably defeating the creature according to [[Mr. Bridwell]]'s notes. A few weeks later in January, while members of Honor Guard were covering for [[Samaritan]] and [[Winged Victory]]'s first date, Cleopatra faced tornadoes threatening Topeka, Kansas.  During [[Thunderhead]]s attempted destruction of the city in September of 1996, she joined many various heroes in defending Astro City.
+Cleopatra has been a member of Honor Guard since at least 1995 and has had many exploits with them as well. During the [[Enelsian Invasion]], Cleopatra and Honor Guard were instrumental in discovering the initial Enelsian scout ship and later defending Astro City, which faced the brunt of the aliens attack. She also was present when the reawakened [[Omnius Rex]] in late 2004 required the combined might of Honor Guard, the [[First Family]] and other heroes of Astro City to be ultimately defeated.
 Teaming with [[Jack-in-the-Box (Roscoe James)|Jack-in-the-Box]] on a case in April of 2003, the duo reapprehended [[Demolitia]] and [[Slamburger]] who were trying to intimidate a member of the east-coast mob to agree to a deal on their terms.
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 {{character page
-|intro        = A current member of Honor Guard, Cleopatra protects Astro City and the rest of the world from various  menaces. She is the successor (of sorts) to the original [[Cleopatra I|Cleopatra]].
+|intro        = A current member of [[Honor Guard]], Cleopatra protects Astro City and the rest of the world from various  menaces. She is the successor (of sorts) to the original [[Cleopatra I|Cleopatra]].
 |history      =
 ===How It All Began===
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 In the ensuing months, The Omega Rangers helped her adjust to the culture shock of her new situation. Their most vital assistance was providing her with training on using her powers effectively. She quickly earned membership with the team.
-===Her Early Years With Honor Guard===
+===Established Hero and Joining Honor Guard===
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