Skyraker - Revision history

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Astrozac at 20:37, 28 May 2016

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Infobroker at 22:14, 23 October 2015

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Infobroker at 00:43, 23 October 2015

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Infobroker at 00:37, 23 October 2015

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Astrozac: removing spoiler warning

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removing spoiler warning

Astrozac at 05:09, 2 October 2015

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 |powers       =
-He has the the ability of fligh,t but whether it's an innate ability or a power derived from his suit is not clear.
+He has the the ability of flight, but whether it's an innate ability or a power derived from his suit is not clear.
 |equipment    = The high tech suit he wears features some sort of blasting mechanisms.

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 === The Era of Kid Jackdaw ===
 Before changing his name and identity to Skysweeper, Jason was know as Kid Jackdaw.
-For a couple of months in the 2002-2003 time-frame, he briefly dated [[Astra Furst]] while she was in High School.
+For a few months, in the 2002-2003 time-frame, he briefly dated [[Astra Furst]] while she was in High School.
 === Leader of the Reflex Six ===
 The bulk of his time is currently spent managing this team of Millennial aged super-heroes. The team took shape pretty much as Jason wanted it too.  Even Astra became a member, although that is only a part-time gig for her at present.
-In the fall of 2014, the team was spotted in Minneapolis, working to contain a group of renegade robots know as the [[Kontrollers]].  Jimmy Shade took heavy damages in that battle.
+In the fall of 2014, the team was spotted in Minneapolis, working to contain a group of renegade robots know as the [[Kontrollers]].  [[Jimmy Shade]] took heavy damage in that battle.
-By late-Spring of 2015, Gorgona took a leave of absence, and Jason went recruiting for a new member.  Their candidates included a silver-back gorilla (no really) by the name of '''Sticks'''.
+By late-Spring of 2015, [[Gorgona]] took a leave of absence, and Jason went recruiting for a new member.  Their candidates included a silver-back gorilla (no really) by the name of '''[[Sticks]]'''.
 Apparently Jason is also bit focused on image and identity.  His name has changed again and he now goes by the handle of "'''Skyraker'''."
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 |powers       =
-He has the the ability of flight but whether it's an innate ability or the ability of his suit is unknown.
+He has the the ability of fligh,t but whether it's an innate ability or a power derived from his suit is not clear.
-|equipment    = The high tech suit he wears features some sort of blasting mechanism.
+|equipment    = The high tech suit he wears features some sort of blasting mechanisms.
 |observations =
-If he has any relationship with the [[Kiefer Square]] villain The [[Jackdaw]], it has yet to be discussed in any storylines or elsewhere by the creative staff.
+If he has any relationship with the [[Kiefer Square]] villain The [[Jackdaw]], it has yet to be discussed in any storylines to date, or elsewhere by the creative staff.
 |speculations =

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 |hair         =
 |headlines    =
-|appearances  = {{ASTRA}} [[CS:Astra 1|#1]] <br>
+|appearances  = {{ASTRA}} [[{{ASTRA}} No.1|#1]] <br>
-{{AC}} [[3:1|#1]], 14, 23, 24, 26 <br>
+{{AC}} [[{{AC}} No.1|#1]], 14, 23, 24, 26 <br>
 }}
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 |powers       =
-Flight
+He has the the ability of flight but whether it's an innate ability or the ability of his suit is unknown.
-|equipment    =
+|equipment    = The high tech suit he wears features some sort of blasting mechanism.
 |observations =

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 |headlines    =
 |appearances  = {{ASTRA}} [[CS:Astra 1|#1]] <br>
-{{AC}} #1, 14, 23, 24, 26 <br>
+{{AC}} [[3:1|#1]], 14, 23, 24, 26 <br>
 }}
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 ''"He saved the world [three] times!"'' -- '''Matt Zimmer'''
-Jason is pretty much the main founding force for the super-hero team, '''the Reflex 6'''. He handled the concept, arranged the funding and choose the team members. He displays great leadership skills, keeping disperse members functioning well as a team, and dealing with organizational duties effectively.  His skills as super-hero are not be taken lightly either. Although we have yet to see the paticulars on-panel, as it says above, He saved the world three times."
+Jason is pretty much the main founding force for the super-hero team, '''the Reflex 6'''. He handled the concept, arranged the funding and choose the team members. He displays great leadership skills, keeping disperse members functioning well as a team, and dealing with organizational duties effectively.  His skills as a super-hero are not be taken lightly either. Although we have yet to see the particulars on-panel, as it says above, ''"He saved the world three times."''
 |history      =

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+<!--
-|date = September 15th, 2015 -->
+{{SpoilerAlert
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 |image        = Image:skysweeper.jpg

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 {{character page
 |intro        =
-Jayson is pretty much the main founding force for the super-hero team, '''the Reflex 6'''. He handled the concept, arranged the funding and choose the team members. He displays great leadership skills, keeping disperse members functioning well as a team, and dealing with organizational duties effectively.  His skills as super-hero are not be taken lightly either.
+Jason is pretty much the main founding force for the super-hero team, '''the Reflex 6'''. He handled the concept, arranged the funding and choose the team members. He displays great leadership skills, keeping disperse members functioning well as a team, and dealing with organizational duties effectively.  His skills as super-hero are not be taken lightly either.
 '''