https://herocopia.com/index.php?action=history&feed=atom&title=Talk%3APyramidTalk:Pyramid - Revision history2026-05-20T09:02:42ZRevision history for this page on the wikiMediaWiki 1.31.16https://herocopia.com/index.php?title=Talk:Pyramid&diff=15918&oldid=prevInfobroker: /* Work Checklist */ new section2017-03-27T01:49:14Z<p><span dir="auto"><span class="autocomment">Work Checklist: </span> new section</span></p>
<p><b>New page</b></p><div>== Work Checklist ==<br />
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My last edit I did some basic edits, sentence structure clean ups, further context clarification, run on sentence elimination. This still needs work. <br />
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I like the section about the ranks. I will add pictures if I can find appropriate ones that don't need a lot of image manipulation to remove dialog balloons and other noise.<br />
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The history section is a blow-by-blow list, rather dry and towards the end becomes disjointed and choppy. Needs more of a history about the organization, how it started, grew and become a dominate worldwide crime organization. Its current status would be a good ending point. Even if the details aren't mentioned directly, questions about how they grew would serve the purpose of what I am looking for here. <br />
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Some of the blow by blow can be injected into the broader history narrative, the extra can be listed as bullet points in the Observation section.--[[User:Infobroker|Infobroker]] ([[User talk:Infobroker|talk]]) 18:49, 26 March 2017 (PDT)</div>Infobroker