The Enelsians - Revision history

Infobroker: better, but still needs a bit of rewrite and more material about them.

2018-01-11T06:20:21Z

better, but still needs a bit of rewrite and more material about them.

Infobroker: clean up needed but I need to get to work

2018-01-10T19:51:56Z

clean up needed but I need to get to work

Astrozac at 06:55, 18 December 2016

2016-12-18T06:55:29Z

Infobroker at 18:52, 6 October 2015

2015-10-06T18:52:02Z

Astrozac: Astrozac moved page Enelsians to The Enelsians

2014-03-09T07:31:45Z

Astrozac moved page Enelsians to The Enelsians

Astrozac at 07:30, 9 March 2014

2014-03-09T07:30:51Z

Astrozac at 04:55, 3 February 2014

2014-02-03T04:55:14Z

Infobroker at 22:22, 5 January 2014

2014-01-05T22:22:49Z

Astrozac at 08:19, 22 December 2013

2013-12-22T08:19:52Z

Astrozac at 03:23, 22 September 2013

2013-09-22T03:23:47Z

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 {{Character infobox2
-|image     = Image:Enelsians350.jpg
+|image     = Image:EnelsianPinned.jpg
 |status    = Active, somewhere in the galaxy.
 |realname  =
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 |intro =
 The Enelsians are a shape shifting race of aliens, with a matriarchal power structure.
 |history =
-Their early interstellar history is one of mistakes and failures. Eventually they matured out of that stage into a race of interplanetary conquerors who desired to take down the [[Galactic Council]].
+After the Confessor revealed the ruse, they were eventually forced to retreat.
-===Reconnaissance Period on Earth ===
+[[image:Enelsians350.jpg|350px|center]]
-===The [[Enelsian Invasion]]===
+|powers =
-Their attack on Earth was spearheaded by a "fifth column" of spies and impersonators who weakened Earth both by framing people, and by replacing government officials, and using their power to slip in troops, and focus negative attention on people that were considered a potential threat.
+* Portions of their natural form bear some physical similarities to the earthen insect order called '''Mantodea''', of which the '''Mantis''' is the largest and most familiar.  In fact, their biological forms and technical devices seem to perform very much in the same manner as insects.  Further, their exterior skeletons, their blood cells, even their machines and vehicles are powered by a liquid material that behaves very much like the hemolymph liquid that constitutes the blood of earth's insects.
-After the Confessor revealed the ruse, they were eventually forced to retreat.
+* Their spaceships have a very organic structure.  Perhaps mechanical at the core, but with an overlay of living material. Maybe an alien life form captured and genetically manipulated by the Enelsians, or a derivative species of their originating planet. Either way, when they are damaged, they ''"bleed"'' a greenish material, and emit an noise that resembles screams of pain.
 |speculations =
 |timeline =

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 {{editMark
 |notes =
-lightly mention [[Mr. Bridwell]] let the details be on his page
+lightly mention [[Mr. Bridwell]] let the details be on his page. Also fix up the run-on, rambling sentences.
 }}

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 |hair        =
 |headlines   =
-|appearances = {{KBAC1}} [[1:5|#5]] <br>
+|appearances = {{KBAC1}} [[{{KBAC1}} No.5|#5]] <br>
-{{KBAC2}} [[2:5|#5]], [[2:7|7]], [[2:8|8]], [[2:9|9]]<br>
+{{KBAC2}} [[{{KBAC2}} No.5|#5]], [[{{KBAC2}} No.7|7]], [[{{KBAC2}} No.8|8]], [[{{KBAC2}} No.9|9]]<br>
 }}
 {{character page

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