Talk:The Red Queen

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While I've cleaned up the blow-by-blow history, this page doesn't seem focused enough on the Red Queen. It should be looking at her, her motivations with an undercurrent of information about her relationship to the Mock Turtle. Her mischievous childhood, always looking for opportunities to cheat and swindle others. Her manipulation of gullible people. Her self-centered ego and her interest in only herself.

I made several focus adjustments. A few more tweaks perhaps?

--Infobroker (talk) 11:22, 18 April 2018 (PDT)