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| − | This page is very difficult to read. Basic sentence structures (nouns, verbs and objects) are tangled. There are run-on sentences that further confuse communication. It needs revision, editing and general clean-up. | + | This page is very difficult to read. Basic sentence structures (nouns, verbs and objects) are tangled. There are run-on sentences that further confuse communication. It needs revision, editing and general clean-up.--[[User:Infobroker|Infobroker]] ([[User talk:Infobroker|talk]]) 22:35, 25 October 2015 (PDT) |
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This page is very difficult to read. Basic sentence structures (nouns, verbs and objects) are tangled. There are run-on sentences that further confuse communication. It needs revision, editing and general clean-up.--Infobroker (talk) 22:35, 25 October 2015 (PDT)
http://grammar.about.com/od/basicsentencegrammar/a/basicstructures.htm
