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Yet, the years have taken there toll and he shows great reluctance to acknowledge the reality of his slowed reflexes, tired muscles, and increased fatigue levels. He has sought remedies, medical and chemical, to this ego-deflating delemmia. Some of them, have gotten him into trouble. Most especially his tinkering with a body enhancing serum used by the [[Black Rapier]]. Worse, he sought help from an even riskier source when he conspired with the evil [[Gormenghast]] to enhance the serum, hoping to make it work effectively on his own aging body.

That ~~adventure~~ turned extremely sour. The devasting betrayal by Gormenghast left him crippled and near death. He would need a full time caregiver to assist in whatever physical restoration might be possible. Quarrel decided to take responsible for Crackerjack's rehab, vowing to put him through a special kind of hell as an incentive towards a strong, positive, recovery.

That gamble turned extremely sour. The devasting betrayal by Gormenghast left him crippled and near death. He would need a full time caregiver to assist in whatever physical restoration might be possible. Quarrel decided to take responsible for Crackerjack's rehab, vowing to put him through a special kind of hell as an incentive towards a strong, positive, recovery.

With Honor Guard's help, Crackerjack and Quarrel were able to get access to a top-notch treatment facility in Astro City, where the two could focus on rehabilitation. Crackerjack even promised that, should Quarrel manage to pull off his physical recovery successfully, he might even tell her his real name.

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 Yet, the years have taken there toll and he shows great reluctance to acknowledge the reality of his slowed reflexes, tired muscles, and increased fatigue levels. He has sought remedies, medical and chemical, to this ego-deflating delemmia. Some of them, have gotten him into trouble. Most especially his tinkering with a body enhancing serum used by the [[Black Rapier]]. Worse, he sought help from an even riskier source when he conspired with the evil [[Gormenghast]] to enhance the serum, hoping to make it work effectively on his own aging body.
-That adventure turned extremely sour. The devasting betrayal by Gormenghast left him crippled and near death. He would need a full time caregiver to assist in whatever physical restoration might be possible. Quarrel decided to take responsible for Crackerjack's rehab, vowing to put him through a special kind of hell as an incentive towards a strong, positive, recovery.
+That gamble turned extremely sour. The devasting betrayal by Gormenghast left him crippled and near death. He would need a full time caregiver to assist in whatever physical restoration might be possible. Quarrel decided to take responsible for Crackerjack's rehab, vowing to put him through a special kind of hell as an incentive towards a strong, positive, recovery.
 With Honor Guard's help, Crackerjack and Quarrel were able to get access to a top-notch treatment facility in Astro City, where the two could focus on rehabilitation. Crackerjack even promised that, should Quarrel manage to pull off his physical recovery successfully, he might even tell her his real name.