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{{character page
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|intro        =
|intro        = '''Michael Tenicek''', like so many men, was haunted by the dreams [[Miranda | of a woman]], one he could remember vividly--except for the fact that he had no idea who she was, how he might know her, or if she ever existed.
|history      = '''Michael Tenicek''', like so many men, was haunted by the dreams [[Miranda | of a woman]], one he could remember vividly--except for the fact that he had no idea who she was, how he might know her, or if she ever existed. Her did know her name, Miranda, which was as vivid as the nightly dreams that plagued him.  The visions and activities of the dreams were so intense, they disturbed his daily rhythms, disrupting his focus and productivity.  
 
|history      = He did know her name, Miranda, which was as vivid as the nightly dreams that plagued him.  The visions and activities of the dreams were so intense, they disturbed his daily rhythms, disrupting his focus and productivity.  


Thinking she might be part of some faded memories of the past, he sought out and pestered old friends and acquaintances,  hoping for some kind of information that might be a clue to this mysterious woman's identity.  
Thinking she might be part of some faded memories of the past, he sought out and pestered old friends and acquaintances,  hoping for some kind of information that might be a clue to this mysterious woman's identity.