Talk:The Pale Horseman

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This page is very difficult to read. Basic sentence structures (nouns, verbs and objects) are tangled. There are run-on sentences that further confuse communication. It needs revision, editing and general clean-up. I've cleaned up the Intro section and removed a redundancy. However the History Section is still a mess. --Infobroker (talk) 22:35, 25 October 2015 (PDT)

http://grammar.about.com/od/basicsentencegrammar/a/basicstructures.htm