Talk:The Pale Horseman
Revision as of 00:35, 26 October 2015 by Infobroker (talk | contribs)
This page is very difficult to read. Basic sentence structures (nouns, verbs and objects) are tangled. There are run-on sentences that further confuse communication. It needs revision, editing and general clean-up.--Infobroker (talk) 22:35, 25 October 2015 (PDT)
http://grammar.about.com/od/basicsentencegrammar/a/basicstructures.htm
