Talk:The Pale Horseman
Revision as of 00:53, 26 October 2015 by Infobroker (talk | contribs)
This page is very difficult to read. Basic sentence structures (nouns, verbs and objects) are tangled. There are run-on sentences that further confuse communication. It needs revision, editing and general clean-up. I've cleaned up the Intro section and removed a redundancy. However the History Section is still a mess. --Infobroker (talk) 22:35, 25 October 2015 (PDT)
http://grammar.about.com/od/basicsentencegrammar/a/basicstructures.htm
