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It required several time leaps and stops along the way. At some, the intrusion was peaceful, others required his special skills as a superhuman force to resolve the conflicts that brought him to that point in time. | It required several time leaps and stops along the way. At some, the intrusion was peaceful, others required his special skills as a superhuman force to resolve the conflicts that brought him to that point in time. | ||
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At his furthermost future time point, Earth is a battlefield for two humongous titans, the [[Silicoids]]. One is a rocky giant, almost a mountain in dimensions and shaped in a humanoid fashion. The other, avian in form, a glass-like composition, and a shape of sharp angles and planes shaped like a winged raptor. It is a fractal nightmare. | At his furthermost future time point, Earth is a battlefield for two humongous titans, the [[Silicoids]]. One is a rocky giant, almost a mountain in dimensions and shaped in a humanoid fashion. The other, avian in form, a glass-like composition, and a shape of sharp angles and planes shaped like a winged raptor. It is a fractal nightmare. | ||
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What the two towering figures share is a "harmonic madness," continuing propelling them into raging combat with one another. With the help of people of that era, the Silver Agent retrieves the necessary data to cure that madness. | What the two towering figures share is a "harmonic madness," continuing propelling them into raging combat with one another. With the help of people of that era, the Silver Agent retrieves the necessary data to cure that madness. | ||
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In a future somewhat less distant, yet still far displaced, Earth is was under an invasion by the insectoid [[Hive Warriors]]. The Silver Agent fought beside the [[Steelhearts]], men and women who sacrificed their very physical bodies to become battle-worthy robots, to break the aliens' attack on the country-to-come known as Ohmerika. The victory was not without cost; their supply of pseudo-plasma destroyed, the Steelhearts could no longer regain their lost humanity. | In a future somewhat less distant, yet still far displaced, Earth is was under an invasion by the insectoid [[Hive Warriors]]. The Silver Agent fought beside the [[Steelhearts]], men and women who sacrificed their very physical bodies to become battle-worthy robots, to break the aliens' attack on the country-to-come known as Ohmerika. The victory was not without cost; their supply of pseudo-plasma destroyed, the Steelhearts could no longer regain their lost humanity. | ||
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Time-shift again to a flooded world. The Silver Agent rides with the [[Aqua-Knights]], armored warriors whose steeds very much resemble seahorses, if seahorses were large enough to be ridden saddle-back. They sported jutting, seaweed-like growths from their hides. As a team they found the means to lower the water levels, returning dry land masses on a global scale. | Time-shift again to a flooded world. The Silver Agent rides with the [[Aqua-Knights]], armored warriors whose steeds very much resemble seahorses, if seahorses were large enough to be ridden saddle-back. They sported jutting, seaweed-like growths from their hides. As a team they found the means to lower the water levels, returning dry land masses on a global scale. | ||
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In a shadowy military command center, he viewed holographic displays and discussed with military commanders and leaders the strategies of their desperate struggle. | In a shadowy military command center, he viewed holographic displays and discussed with military commanders and leaders the strategies of their desperate struggle. | ||
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When the remnants of human civilization were bifurcated into feral women who rode giant hamsters and barbarian men, the Agent united the genders once more. | When the remnants of human civilization were bifurcated into feral women who rode giant hamsters and barbarian men, the Agent united the genders once more. | ||
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Ascending [[Mount Kirby]] against winds and pounding rain, he and others found the lost library (whose robots were, fortunately, still functioning) that would help rebuild the world. | Ascending [[Mount Kirby]] against winds and pounding rain, he and others found the lost library (whose robots were, fortunately, still functioning) that would help rebuild the world. | ||
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| − | |notes = each time shift needs a title, and exposition explaining that with each, the Silver Agent is getting closer and closer to his own time period and the doom that awaits him there. Talking a bit more about the impact of that doom might also help. | + | |notes = each time shift needs a title, and exposition explaining that with each, the Silver Agent is getting closer and closer to his own time period and the doom that awaits him there. Talking a bit more about the impact of that doom might also help. Sentence structures and information provided is also very spotty and incomplete. I clean up the first entries a bit, but things really get cloudy at the end. |
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